by Anthony_Conty: The key to writing Gothic literature lies in establishing the boundaries of the universe and getting readers to buy into that reality. “The Creation of Half-Broken People” by Siphiwe Gloria Ndlovu succeeds admirably. You know that you are reading fiction, but our nameless protagonist still sounds like someone you could meet. Since she has visions, you feel disoriented but engaged.
I was a little impatient as the fantastical elements unfolded. There are several unique main characters from different timelines, and you diligently try to get to know all of them. So, basically, the book is a series of vignettes from ancestors and descendants, and the writer wants you to interpret their hidden meanings to connect them into a full story.
The tales of Africa paint a vision of how the world there is and was and how skin color can lead to different treatment. The land has a rich history. The fact that this heritage comes through in the horrific events on the pages is a testament to the author. Things do not really come together until the halfway point, so be patient
Around page 245, threads start to fall into place, and you accept the magical realism that identifies some characters as visions and others as real historical figures. Most of you can already decide whether to read it. If you like deeper meaning and allegories, look no further, but this is not an “on the surface” effort.
I see what Ndlovu was trying to do here, and she mostly succeeds. Understanding the role that race and class played in Africa over the past century will help with details. The author takes a bleak novel and ends on a positive, inspiring, and life-affirming note. Ndlovu has a way with words, and she saves what could have been very preachy.
